Quatrain- What is this feeling?
What is this feeling I have in my stomach?
When I am near you I think I might fly.
When did my emotions start feeling atomic?
Well whatever it is I am glad I have you to abide by.
Triplet- I am a werewolf
His claws sank through raw flesh
Scars that I will surely never lose
Was it worth it for the outcome?
The moon became my nemesis
Smirking down at me through the sky
I howl at him, let him know he failed me.
My home is now the moor,
Lying in the grass is my new found peace
Alpha howl at dawn means fight.
Wow again Bluebell, your writings going from strength to strength.
ReplyDeleteYou’ve done well with the rhyming in your 4 line Quatrain poem. My favourite however is I am a Werewolf.
The last 2 stanzas are very powerful. Your words, almost gothic in their beauty. You should be very very proud of your writing.
I think you should be awarded an honorary game of Werewolf don’t you...
thank you so much Jane,I love supernatural beings and I am fascinated to know if its real or not. I also love writing about it.
DeleteGreat poems Blue, I had to ask you if you had written these! Lol.
ReplyDeleteI definitely wrote them. I know i'm cool :)
DeleteHi Bluebell. Wow I am very impressed by your quatrain. The rhyming in it is very good. Maybe next time check if your triplet rhymes but I like it anyway. You are a very good poet. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Bluebell,
ReplyDeleteThe poems you wrote are very good.
I don't think I could of done better.
This reminded me of when I wrote a poem.
Why Did you write 2 poem though?
Kind Regards Leandri