the icy lake

we have been learning how to write a six paragraph story in class  hope you enjoy 

the icy lake


Mr Barr was staring at the frost on the trees is as flakey as a dry apricot. The lake is a frozen carpet waiting to be walked on. The polar bear was a kind critter with loads of friends. The tall trees were as large as a massive building. The icy snow was a blanket on all the plants resting. Mr Barr had a special talent he could communicate to wildlife such as animals and pets. He looked down at the lake he took of his hat he was sad because his CAT WAS MISSING his cat was called polo he was his prized possesion and best buddy how was he supposed to find him TO BE CONTINIUED !!!!!

the candy house

                                                           
The rainbow gummy roof you could see from a mile away in the Colours green red orange and yellow. the chocolate chimney was as bumpy as a old road. and the people that live there are Mr ginger and Mrs ginger. they love all things sweet you can see the rainbow road from in outer space it is as bright as a million colours all together. The front door was rounded and as tall as a small tree above the door the candy cane heart above the door

tell me if i made any mistakes and could you guess if it was a candy house if the picture and the title wasnt there

MY SPECIAL CHARACTER

This is stripe she is a cat but now she is in human form she
starred in a famous movie called Police Cats (its a movie me a
nd my friend made)

and helpful she isent very brave but she will do anything to help her best friend maggie she loves to
sing and play guitar and her main personality trait is humor she loves making jokes and her worst fea
r is heights Her favourite food is sushi and chicken bites And her favourite movie greatest showman
She lost her parents at five years of age and she was an orphan but with the help of maggie(who was
an orphan too) they found there parents (they had been captured by evil sewer rats) ❤❤