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Friday, September 14, 2018

the candy house


                                                           
The rainbow gummy roof you could see from a mile away in the Colours green red orange and yellow. the chocolate chimney was as bumpy as a old road. and the people that live there are Mr ginger and Mrs ginger. they love all things sweet you can see the rainbow road from in outer space it is as bright as a million colours all together. The front door was rounded and as tall as a small tree above the door the candy cane heart above the door


tell me if i made any mistakes and could you guess if it was a candy house if the picture and the title wasnt there
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2018 at 12:03 PM

    This is amazing because you described this very well.
    Did you know I like candy as well .
    Next time, you could write more about the owners .


    😎

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  2. AnonymousNovember 12, 2018 at 6:33 PM

    thanks corbin and the people that live in the house are bill and bob they are brothers and love candy so much that sometimes they eat a little bit of there house they eat loads of candy and because of that they are very fat
    from bluebell



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