The Main character - Cassie Evans Green.
Extra characters - Cop, Ward Owner.
Script (Written by Bluebell Barr)
INT. 1992 - A psych ward in New York, ‘Cop’ is leaning against the wall next to ‘Ward Owner’ the setting is dim and dark, - late afternoon
Cop is wearing the typical cop uniform, the camera is looking up at him, he is frowning.
Ward owner is wearing a long silk robe, she has her hair down and it's dead straight. The camera is looking down at her, she is straight faced.
Cop (Skeptical)
“Is it safe? Is she properly contained in there?”
‘Cop’ gestures to the door
Ward Owner (Smirking)
“Fully held back and defenceless.”
‘Cop’ smiles
‘Cop’ stands up from the wall and gently pushes against the solitary confinement room
Camera focuses on ‘Cassie’ she is hunched over in a corner with her hands behind her back, crying.
Cassie is wearing a white long gown, her hair is in rough plaits, the camera looks directly at her.
Cassie (Sniffling)
“Please don’t shoot me…”
Blue- Speech by character
Green- Environment that adds to character
Red- Actions the character does
Yellow- What the character looks like.
Clara and Kirsten had a look at my story and highlighted bits they think match what the colours are.
after looking at there analysis I realized that I probably needed more things in the environment around Cassie to add to her character. and I had enough actions and words, but maybe a bit more of what the character looks like. This is only a snippet of the full text and its pretty much the same average of highlights through out. but I definitely need more environment related things.
Hi Bluebell, I really like your script. I think that your script is really cool, it would be cool if you made a movie on a I pad and put it on your blog post. Maybe add some more describing to your post, hope you like my advise.
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