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Monday, February 18, 2019

The oily penguin



Tangaroa's fingernails

My connection is that i have seen a penguin covered

In oil. And the poor bird nearly died because of it.

I was really worried for him which is why i relate to

Tangaroa. He was worried about oil spreading and so was I



This was a project for our literacy group we read a story called tangaroa's fingernails and it was about some oil spreading in the sea and tangaroa stopping it we were told to find a connection to that story and something that has happened to you and here is mine :)
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2 comments:

  1. Whaea SharonFebruary 26, 2019 at 8:38 AM

    Hi Bluebell
    Good work. You have shown your personal connection and I like the use of an image to add interest for your reader. Just a reminder to check for capital letters (e.g. Tangaroa).

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  2. AnonymousApril 9, 2019 at 1:59 PM

    Hi bluebell good work

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